Show off your Script

Revising and Editing
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Step
01/16
Get your supplies.
Step
02/16
Get your desk ready. Put your sources, notes, and other VIP papers
in a pile to the side. Put your writing checklist side by side with your
draft.
Step
03/16
Find the introduction section of your checklist. Read your
introduction and check off the parts you already have.
Step
04/16
Revise your introduction.
Step
05/16
Read your first body paragraph. Check off the parts you already
have.
Step
06/16
Revise your Location 1 paragraph to make sure all the boxes
are checked.
Step
07/16
Read the revision ideas to yourself. When you’re done, show a quiet
thumbs-up.
Step
08/16
Pick one revision idea and revise your Location 1 paragraph.
Step
09/16
Use your checklist and revision ideas to revise the remaining
paragraphs in your script draft.
Step
10/16
Edit your writing.
Step
11/16
Recopy to write your final draft.

If you need a natural stopping point:

Teachers: This is a natural stopping point. The next steps will guide students through designing and assembling their final video script. If students are typing, print student scripts before moving on. If you stop here, be sure to put all the VIPs somewhere safe!

If you’re continuing right now, go to the next slide.

Step
12/16
Get your supplies.
Step
13/16
Fold your Final Script Cover Page.
Step
14/16
Write your name on your script cover page.
Step
15/16
Color your script cover page.
Step
16/16
Place your final script inside your script cover page.
Show off your Script
Revising and Editing

Students will...

Print Prep

Before this lesson...

  • Students should have completed Lessons 1-4 of this unit.

  • Students should have finished writing a first draft of their script.

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England Expeditions Lesson 5: Show off your Script

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