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Share Your Story

Share Your Story
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Before we begin, you’ll need a piece of writing that you’re going to
edit and get ready to publish. Get the draft you’re working on now.
For Constellations: Get your Beginning and Middle/End Draft
worksheets.
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Discuss: Where is the missing punctuation in this sentence?
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Now, look through your writing. Check the end of every sentence to
make sure it ends with a period, question mark, or exclamation mark.
If it doesn’t, you can add one.
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Discuss: Where is the missing capital letter?
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Check the start of every sentence to make sure it begins with a
capital letter. Check the names of your characters to make sure
they are capitalized. If any are missing, you can change the letter.
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Discuss: Where is the spelling mistake in this sentence?
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Now, get your writing. Use all the spelling strategies you know to help
you spell your words. You can also use resources in your classroom
to help if you’re not sure how to spell a word.
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Discuss: What part of this sentence doesn’t sound right?
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Now, read your writing to check to make sure it sounds right. You can
read in your head or whisper-read to yourself. If you find a part that
doesn’t sound right, you can fix your sentence.
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Recopy your work in your best handwriting.
For Constellations: Get your final story pages.
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Congratulations! Your writing has leveled up!

If you need a natural stopping point:

Teachers: This is a natural stopping point. The next steps will guide students through setting up their final draft to share. If students wrote digitally, we recommend printing student work before moving on. If you stop here, be sure to put all the VIPs somewhere safe!

If you’re continuing right now, go to the next slide.

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Get your supplies.
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Get your first page of your final draft. The title of your constellation
story will be your character’s name. Write it on the line. Write your
name in the author blank.
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Draw a picture of your character using the stars in the constellation.
Your teacher will tell you how much drawing time you have. You can
finish drawing later if you need more time.
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Get the first page of your writing. Fold the page in half along this line.
Line up the corners on both sides before pressing down. Run your
fingernail along the edge to make a good crease.
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Take one corner of the upper flap and fold it back over until the
edges line up making a triangle flap. Make a good crease. Do
the same thing on the other side.
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Unfold your paper along the first fold. If the constellation is not
popping up, you can push it back.You can also adjust the two
triangle flaps on the back to support your constellation more if
needed.
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Set up your desk for others to read your story. Place the first page
at the top of your desk and your other pages in order underneath it.
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Find another story to read. Your teacher will tell you how much time
you’ll have to walk around and read amazing constellation stories!
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Students will...

Print Prep
  • edit their writing for punctuation, capitalization, spelling and usage.

  • use quotation marks for dialogue.

  • recopy their story onto a final copy either by hand or digitally.

  • share their stories in a gallery walk.

Before this lesson...

Students should have completed Lessons 1-4 of this unit.
Final Constellation Story worksheet 1 per student
Final Constellation Story (digital) worksheet
Choose either this digital version or the printable version above. 		1 per student
Prep Instructions
  • Students will need to bring their completed work from the previous lessons to this lesson.

  • This lesson is separated into two parts and can be taught in two different sessions if needed. A natural stopping point is included after students edit, but before they share their Constellation stories.

  • This is a generic editing lesson and can be reused when students are ready to edit any piece of writing.

Extend this lesson

Partner Activity

Partner Activity

Leave specific feedback on your classmates’ writing using these feedback slips

Writing

Writing

Write about another character in the sky using the other constellation pictures at the top of your final draft.

Assessment

Assessment

See how much you’ve grown as a writer by completing this unit’s post-writing activity: Nocturnal Creature Stories

Video

Video

Who Created the Constellations?
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Constellation Stories Lesson 5: Share Your Story

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